A follow-up to "A double failure is a giant failure"
The ERC Step-1 evaluation for STRADIVARI has arrived. I promised in November that when it came I would read it carefully and share what I learned. The verdict: score B, ranking range 75–84%, where the top 37% advanced. So the project sits in the lower-middle of PE10 ADG 2025 — not borderline, not retained.
Let me work through what the four reviewers and the panel actually said, because some of it is fair, some of it is unfair, and one piece of it deserves a longer comment about how reviewing is changing in the age of AI suspicion.
The convergent verdict: "incremental"
The panel summary, and three of the four reviewers, converge on a single word: incremental. Reviewer 1 puts it most plainly — the system "falls more or less in the same category" as existing land-surface schemes and is "essentially built by assembling existing components." The panel adopted this reading almost verbatim: "Coupled atmosphere–land models of the suggested type already exist, and the panel was not convinced how the project would go beyond these existing approaches."
I should take this seriously, and I do. But I also want to say honestly what I think happened.
STRADIVARI was framed around what I called a "luthier" approach: building instruments that enable virtuoso scientific work, rather than promising the breakthrough finding myself. The proposal says it explicitly in Part B2: "The project provides the instruments; the community provides the scientific virtuosity."
This is what I believe. It is also, I now see, almost designed to be scored "incremental" by an ERC ADG panel. ADG rewards a PI who claims they will deliver the breakthrough. By framing my project as infrastructure that enables others to make breakthroughs, I handed the panel the exact line they used. They read my honest description of the project's character back to me as a weakness.
I do not regret the framing. I regret choosing the wrong instrument for it. The "luthier" vision is real, the GEOframe/WHETGEO/GEOSPACE work is real, and the integration questions are real. But ADG is not where that proposal belongs. That is a strategic lesson, not a scientific one.
What was actually in the proposal that nobody saw
The proposal contained several specific theoretical claims that, taken individually, are not incremental. The resilience-vs-optimization framing of plant hydraulics (D'Amato & Rigon 2025), the dynamic-SWRC-under-biota proposal, the deconstruction of the resistance framework so that ABL turbulence is resolved rather than parameterized and conductance is left as a purely physiological quantity — none of these are "assembling existing components." They are theoretical positions. But they appear in the proposal as sub-bullets inside a framework-integration narrative, and Reviewer 1, scanning for novelty, never reached them. Reviewer 3, who engaged scientifically, did not flag them either — which means they were not loud enough.
This is on me. I knew this, and I made the choice to lead with the integrating framework. It was the wrong choice for this audience. Everybody overlooked the citations of Diego Miralles et al. (2025): "Current ESS Models fail to capture critical feedbacks between soil evolution, plant hydraulics, and atmospheric processes required for understanding coupled hydrological and ecosystem functioning because Earth's system compartments are often treated as silos or heavily parameterized in crucial aspects of their dynamics."
The four-pillar problem
R2, R3, and R4 each separately worry about how the four pillars (Soil/Biota, Plant Hydraulics, Carbon, ABL) actually integrate. R2 says the proposal "does not convincingly demonstrate how the different parts will be combined." R4 says the methodology is "overly conceptual, with limited discussion of specific validation metrics, error propagation, or computational performance."
This is a real critique. The three-tier validation and minimum-viable-deliverables structure in B2 is there, but it arrives late and it does not pin the whole project to a single experiment that, if it works, validates the integration. ADG proposals win when there is a falsifiable claim at the centre. STRADIVARI has many — too many to land as one.
The Giono problem, and credit to existing literature
R3 makes a small but accurate point: I opened with Giono's L'homme qui plantait des arbres and never paid the framing off. The tree-planter never returns to the proposal. R3 also flags limited engagement with the existing forest-hydrology literature, which is fair: I cited what I needed for the argument, not what I owed to the field. Both points are correctable in any future writing.
And then: the Beven attribution
This is the part that has stayed with me longest. R3 writes:
"I also have to note one surprising aspect: on page 3 (bottom), the formulation 'parameters as garbage collectors' is used with reference to a paper by Keith Beven. Interestingly, this term can not be found in that publication (or any other publication of Beven), but appears as a (made-up) quote when checking with ChatGPT."
Let me be direct. The "garbage collectors" formulation was a shortcut of mine — a paraphrase that condensed something I take to be implicit in Beven (2006) and the equifinality literature, attributed informally with a (sensu Beven, 2006). It was not a quotation, and I did not present it as one. It was a writing shortcut, and a sloppy one, because attaching anyone's name to a paraphrase in an ADG proposal asks for a higher bar of fidelity than that.
I take the correction. Beven did not write those words, I should not have invoked him for them, and a future version of this argument will either find the exact passage or carry the claim in my own voice without his name attached.
But I want to say something about the second half of R3's remark, because it is no longer about my proposal — it is about how reviewing is changing.
R3 verified the phrase by querying ChatGPT and found it appears there as a "made-up quote." That is offered, in the review, as evidence of fabrication. It is presented in a tone that suggests the proposal itself may have been generated, or at least drafted unchecked, by an AI. This is not stated, but the implication is in the air, and the panel has now seen it.
Here is what I want to register. The search for hallucinations is beginning to exceed the people doing it. A reviewer who finds a phrase that does not appear in the cited source has, in 2025, two possible explanations: the author paraphrased badly, or an AI made it up. The second hypothesis is now reached so quickly that it crowds out the first. In my case the first was correct. I made the shortcut myself — the dumb old-fashioned way, sitting at a keyboard, trying to compress two paragraphs of Beven into seven words. That this looks identical, from the outside, to an AI hallucination is not a reason to stop writing carefully. It is a reason that every attribution must now survive the test of being searchable, verifiable, and grounded — because the cost of an unverifiable phrase is no longer "you paraphrased loosely" but "you may not have read the source." That is a real shift in what scientific writing has to do, and we should name it.
A second point worth making: a proposal that also foregrounds AI integration (the SML / OMS4 component) creates extra surface for this suspicion. The proposal is, in some sense, a candidate hypothesis for its own AI-suspicion test. I had not seen that read coming, and I should have.
What the panel said about me, the PI
All four reviewers were generous about the track record. R4 was particularly clear: "highly accomplished and internationally recognised," with the GEOtop/GEOframe/OMS lineage giving "strong credibility." R3 mentioned the AboutHydrology mailing list (almost 7000 subscribers, for those keeping count). R1 and R2 both said I had the necessary qualifications.
I mention this not to console myself but because it locates the problem precisely. The PI was not the problem. The project, as written, was. That is the more useful diagnosis, even if it is the harder one.
What I take from this
A few things, in plain form:
The "luthier" framing is honest, but ADG is the wrong instrument for it. Either Synergy, or a single-PI proposal built around one falsifiable theoretical claim with the infrastructure as means, would fit better.
The deepest scientific moves in STRADIVARI need to be the centre of any future proposal, not the load-bearing sub-bullets of an integration narrative.
The Beven shortcut is fixed for the future. Every named attribution gets verified or removed. Not because reviewers might think it was an AI, but because they are now correct to check, and the burden of verification has shifted onto authors in a way that did not exist five years ago.
The questions STRADIVARI raised — about dynamic feedbacks the current LSM/ESM generation parameterizes away, about whether minimum-energy-dissipation principles extend to the coupled vegetation-soil-atmosphere system, about whether plant strategies are optimal or resilient — are unresolved. The panel did not say otherwise. They said I had not convinced them I would resolve them inside 60 months with this team and this instrument. That is a different claim, and it does not retire the questions.
The proposals stay on
OSF for anyone who wants to read what worked, what did not, and what the panel said about it. As the November post put it, a double failure is a giant failure. But it is the kind of failure that produces a written record, and a written record is more useful than a private wound.
Onward.